Sunday, May 24, 2009

Vulnerable

Very deep down what you feel,
Unspoken to anybody,
Letting it gush forth like a waterfall,
Never do it with somebody,
Eager to cash on it,
Ready to sympathize; but not able to handle the responsibility,
Always have a friend in your self and, 
Befriend only one who truly loves you,
Let the one understand you even if it takes time because,
Everlasting love needs some intelligence too. 


Written on 2nd October, 2000.

(Another one in the lines on Vikram Seth's style. The first letters of each line make up the word vulnerable. A lesson I learned with huge difficulty that you have to be careful about how much you let others see your emotions and your emotional side. Well basically you grow up and wise. And strange thing is that now people friends basically who know me longer know that i am very emotional and can cry at the drop of my hat. But people who know me for less time say about 3 years of less think that I am a strong person which I am  but also less emotional. Life !!!!! and its myriad hues .. One word ..WOW !!!!!!!! ) 


8 comments:

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  2. i love this... gonna copy n paste it in my facebook...

    hafta meet u this time... n read yur dairy... u write so well...

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  3. @ Addy : yes we have to meet this time ..even i was thinking the same !!! lets hope it comes true !!!!!

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  4. hey! very nice read..
    am waiting for L A N R A D I O
    :)

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  5. @Ashish : thanks !! :) he he good idea !! well maybe someday ..

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  6. sad is that a virtue in todays world makes you feel vulnerable :(

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  7. wow this is a brilliant idea..indeed hats off to you maam. A student of English language, at one point of time, did try his level best to make me understand the new ways of penning down poems, but I guess I was still an idiot to imbibe any of the lessons. As a matter of fact I am still learning things, I guess, in the same old slow pace. i am believe you will be able to help me out...

    regards,
    wanderer

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  8. @wanderer: thank you so much !!!! sure would love to discuss writing ... and we all are learning everyday so its to share !!!

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